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Wednesday 6 July 2016

Story Starters - Buddy writing


Many moons ago the was an orangutan who is always treated differently. So he went out on a journey through a rain forest. He was have a peaceful time until he saw a vicious snake. He falls down and gets stuck so he calls for help but on one’s there. The snake gets closer and closer so he used all his strength to get out, He then climbs up a gigantic tree where he is safe. But the snake could climb a tree to so jumps onto another tree. The orangutan kept swinging from tree to tree, he was finally safe but he realized he was lost. So he panicked and tried to find another way out. He started running until he found his home.



Today for writing Oh Hsen and I wrote a story about a orangutan how gets lost in a ran forest. next we had to put three powerful word changes then we had to buddy up with an other group of two and we had to lessen to there story and draw every thing that they read onto our paper.



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